Hello Levi C, I like the way you had described your barn with similes and metaphors. The line that you said the fence is as white as snow, was kind of like mine, I said that the flowers of spring appeared through the snow. Maybe next time you could use different words to start your sentences like also,that and those.
Hello Levi C, I like the way you had described your barn with similes and metaphors. The line that you said the fence is as white as snow, was kind of like mine, I said that the flowers of spring appeared through the snow. Maybe next time you could use different words to start your sentences like also,that and those.
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