Monday 7 May 2018

Descriptive writing

In the early morning the soccer goal is staying still. The trees are big. The sun shining thru the trees on the white frosty ground. The grass is freezing and it crunches under your shoes. My fingers are frozen and numb. and I can see my breath. My hair is sticking up because it is solid frozen.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 May 2018 at 12:21

    That's a lovely photo Levi.
    Mum

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  2. Ms Dellaway3 June 2018 at 13:41

    Ka pai Levi! I know that you have been working hard in class to grow your descriptive writing skills recently. You are showing determination and focus, and I look forward to reading your recent work so that you can show everyone how much you have learnt.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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